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I've been struggling to keep my pace going, and yet, get the essentials down. Give it a read if you will, and let me know what works or doesn’t work.
On a side note, I have determined to do what it takes, and never give up on my dream… even if it takes the rest of my life. I thank everyone who has been a part of my development. I hope it isn’t too much to read, thx either way.
Chapter 1
Removed... Thx for the ones who offered opinions.
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Hi John,
ReplyDeleteI sent you an e-mail about your post. Thought it was too long to write in the comments section. Hope it helps. Merry Christmas and a happy New Year.
I'm intrigued!
ReplyDeleteA few of the commas seemed out of place to me, but that's nit picky. I think you've done a nice job of showing Tristan's character, and setting up for an action-packed story.
Jeff,
ReplyDeleteI hope you have a wonderful 2011, pursuing your dreams...
I sent you an email. :)
Hey Jeff, I hope you're still chugging along with that manuscript! Happy new year to you and your family.
ReplyDeleteHappy new year, Jeff. I miss your more frequent posts. I was glad to hear you have recommitted.
ReplyDeleteI don't know where you've posted your writing, so I don't know where to go to read it. I probably would not be much help to you anyway.
I missed it, but I hope the feedback you got was helpful, and I hope the writing's going well!
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